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凡是猴子作出的决策
我们都坚决维护；
凡是猴子的指示
我们都始终不渝地遵循。

The line graph shows the trend of people in different ages going to the cinema from 1990 to present with projection by 2010.
Obviously, in 1990 nearly 90% of young people watched movies and the current percentage keeps rising to 91%. It is projected that it will continue to increase to 95%. Turning to the elderly,the percentage increased sharply between 1990 and 2009 from 40% to 60%, and more and more elderlies will watch the film. In terms of 25~34 and 35~49-year-old, they were both at 60% in 1990,and 80% in 2006. However, the former becomes lower in 2009, and it keeps rising to 85% while the latter remains declining.
In short, i think movies have attracted more and more people go to the cinema.
继续等待高人吧～～

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引用： 活动内容: 看看有没有语法错误 The line graph shows trends in the percentage of different people going to the cinema from 1990 to present with projection to 2010. Obviously, we can see that in 1990 the times young people seeing the film was nearly 90% and kept rising to 91% till present. It is projected that the percentage will keep increasing to 95%. Turning to the older people the percentage increased sharply between 1990 and 2009 from around 40% to 60%, and more and more elderlies will see the film. In terms of 25~34 and 35~49 year old were at the same rate at 60% in 1990,and in 2006 the percentage is 80% for each. However, the former become lower than the latter in 2009, and the first one keep rising to 85% meanwhile the second one remains declining. To sum up, i think movies have attracted more and more people often you go to the cinema. 搞定给10PP 该贴剩余积分：10分，已分配：0分！ 已获奖励的人员: 暂无用户获得奖励！

最后一句，movies are attracting more and more people to cinema.
用现在进行时来表达正在发生和即将发生的事，另外，原来的那个to go完全是累赘，很拗口，cinema前面也不用加定词the

这个家伙很懒，什么也没留下......